“Drone as a multifunctional tool in digital era”
(The Second Assignment of Writing V)
By
Name : Pipit Marareta
NPM : 131111049
HIGHER SCHOOL OF FOREIGN
LANGUAGE
PERGURUAN TINGGI TEKNOKRAT
BANDAR LAMPUNG
ABSTRACT
Drone as a multifunctional tool in digital era
Name :
Pipit Margareta
Student
Number : 13111049
Email : pipitmargareta@yahoo.com
In this digital era, everything we do should be in simple way with the help of technology, because we run of time to achieve our target. In addition, technology has important role in helping us to do our activities. Now, Drone come for us with advantages that can help us in some activities which not easy to touch before and become easier to touched by Drone, for example making films, air photography, food delivery, seacrh and rescue and even mapping. Drones is crewless mini aircraft flown by remote control and radio frequencies, are becoming increasingly popular amongst technology lovers throughout the world. Drone provide a way for users to see a large area of inventory without having to leave their desk. This is like sulotion for people that work in this field, Drone can help them to make their job easier, Because Drone can reach media access in hard places.
Key : Drone,Technology, Multifunctional
Drone
as a multifunctional tool in digital era
INTRODUCTION
Do know flying
robot. that can help us making films, air photography, food delivery, seacrh and
rescue and even mapping ???
In
this digital era, technology always developing to help us eaiser when doing our
activities. Nowdays, An unmanned aerial vehicle (UAV), commonly known as a Drone, come for us with
some advantages that can help us in some activities which not easy to touch
before and become easier to touch with
Drone, for example making films, air photography,
food delivery, seacrh and rescue and even mapping. According to The information Civil Aviation Organization
(ICAO), Drone
is an aircraft without a human pilot on board. Its flight is
either controlled autonomously by computers in the vehicle, or under
the remote control of navigator, or pilot (in the military UAVs
called combat system officer) on the ground or in another vehicle.
Nowdays, Drones are becoming increasingly popular amongst
technology lovers throughout the world. Drone provide a way for users to see a large area of
inventory without having to leave their desk. This is like sulotion for people
that work in this field
such as Cameraman, Police Officers, Photography Lovers, and etc. Drone can help them to make their job easier, Because Drone can reach media access in hard places.
Here we will classify drone as a multifunctional tool in this digital era based on its function, such as The drone can save lives, contribute to safe infrastructure maintenance and management, can give media access in hard places, can give streamline agriculture management, and as tool for food delivery.
Here we will classify drone as a multifunctional tool in this digital era based on its function, such as The drone can save lives, contribute to safe infrastructure maintenance and management, can give media access in hard places, can give streamline agriculture management, and as tool for food delivery.
DISCUSSION
The meaning of Drone
According to The Information Civil Aviation
Organization (ICAO), Drone is an aircraft without a
human pilot on board. Its flight is either controlled autonomously by
computers in the vehicle, or under the remote control of navigator,
or pilot (in the military UAVs called combat system officer) on the ground
or in another vehicle.
The
factors make Drone as a multifunctional tool based on its function
Nowdays, Drones are becoming increasingly popular amongst
technology users throughout the world. Drone provide a way for users to see a large area of
inventory without having to leave their desk. This is like sulotion for people
that work in this field such as Cameraman, Police Officers,
Photography Lovers, and etc. Drone can
help them to make their job easier. Because Drone can reach media access in hard places. Then, I classify Drone as a
multifunctional tool based on its function below :
1.
The drone can save lives.
In natural and manmade disasters, search for lost people, Drone can be positioned to survey damage and assess ongoing threats without
risking the safety of rescue teams and first-responders.
According to dronelife.com, Drones help locate missing child. After spending almost two weeks lost in the Siberian forests and swamplands, four-year-old Karina is finally going home–and it is all thanks to a drone. On July 29th, Karina went missing from the Yakutia Republic in Russia; however, due lack of communication between the child’s parents, authorities were only notified of her disappearance on August 3rd.
In order to cover 30 kilometers of dense forest and swampland, authorities exhausted their manpower and all technologies available to find the missing girl. Search parties, sniffer dogs, helicopters, specialists, and drones made up the team of rescuers looking for Katrina. After surveying the vast area, an unmanned aerial vehicle spotted Katrina sitting in tall grass and was able to direct rescuers to her location. Katrina was immediately taken to the hospital where she remains in stable condition.
2.
The drone can contribute to safe
infrastructure maintenance and management.
Consider the difficulty of inspecting
the underside of a bridge or the top of a skyscraper, not to mention the costs
and risks. With Drone, scaffolding, cranes, or harnesses are not required. Just
deploy the system to assess the structure's condition remotely.
According to The Jakarta Post (30/6/2015), The
Jakarta Police plan to deploy five drones to monitor traffic during the Islamic
holiday of Idul Fitri.
Jakarta traffic police
chief Sr. Comr. Risyapudin said on Tuesday that drones were more effective for
monitoring because heavy holiday traffic would limit monitoring on the ground.
“We’re using drones because
the traffic will be very heavy, so it’ll be harder for us to get around,”
Risyapudin said as quoted by kompas.com on Tuesday.
Risyapudin added that the
police planned to deploy the drones to monitor traffic heading to the eastern
parts of Java and to Merak port in Banten, routes normally congested with
people heading to their home regions to celebrate the holiday.
The police, he said, would
work with private parties, including TV stations, in the procurement of the
technology.
As well as monitoring
congested areas, the drones would also be used to predict traffic hot spots, he
said.
3.
The drone can streamline agriculture
management.
Using a crop management system to
observe, measure, and respond to variability in individual plants, farmers can
target areas requiring attention. By pinpointing these areas, farmers can
provide care only where needed—improving yield, conserving resources, and
avoiding waste.
According to The Jakarta Pos (17/9/15) showed The prototype of a quadcopter was flown over
half a hectare of rice fields in Sui Itik village, Kubu Raya regency, West
Kalimantan, to look for agricultural “enemies”. With a GPS and two cameras, the crewless drone is capable of detecting
diseases that may pose a threat to rice plants. Claimed to be the first ever conducted in
Indonesia, the tryout was carried out by Swandiri Institute of Pontianak, the
capital city of the province, with the support of the UN Development Program
(UNDP). Swandiri Institute director
Hermawansyah said that the drone had thus far been mostly used to take aerial
pictures or for area mapping purposes. “By
modifying it, we try to detect pests on crops to ease farmers’ tasks and at the
same time push the government to adopt the measure,” he said.
Hermawansyah said his institute had invited agricultural experts from local universities to prepare for disease analysis and rice productivity prediction based on the data recorded by the drone. Rice plants on average are ready to harvest in four months. As such, food drones are best used when the plants are two months old. That way the right treatment can be applied in the third month according to the analysis based on the visual image captured by the drone.
Hermawansyah said his institute had invited agricultural experts from local universities to prepare for disease analysis and rice productivity prediction based on the data recorded by the drone. Rice plants on average are ready to harvest in four months. As such, food drones are best used when the plants are two months old. That way the right treatment can be applied in the third month according to the analysis based on the visual image captured by the drone.
4.
The drone can give media access in
hard places.
Aerial photography
for a news broadcast, tourism spot or a blockbuster film can be efficiently,
economically, safety captured by Drone.
Accoding
to The Jakarta Post Travel (11/3/15), The
Indonesian Drone Community, along with other brand-specific communities, joined
forces and formed an association officially known as the Indonesian Drone Pilot
Association (APDI). While there are no specific rules for flying drones yet,
the APDI understands and is willing to educate its members to be more
responsible when flying them.
On a
positive note, the APDI really knows the great benefits of drones that are
equipped with cameras, especially in promoting places or locations in
Indonesia, which led them to partner with gadget accessories company Gadgetciti
to hold an Aerial Visual Drone Challenge.
“This
event is the first of the many programs that we, the APDI and Gadgetciti,
agreed upon. This competition also acts as a proof of our concern about the
beauty of tourism spots in Indonesia,” said Fajar as the acting chairman of the
APDI .
In the competition's
finals, 10 finalists will be judged on how many votes they get from social
media viewers and 10 more finalists will be judged by a jury. All of them will
then be invited to a trip to explore and capture the best aerial views on
Mandeh Island in West Sumatra. The winners with the best pictures will then be
rewarded with the latest drone product from DJI and Parrot.
5. The drone can delivery food.
Food delivery is one of the great joys of modern society. You
can order whatever kind of food you want and have it delivered to your doorstep
to enjoy in the comfort of your own home, without ever having to lift a finger
-- after the finger you lifted to select your Seamless order. Delivery has
become so commonplace. But, An Italian restaurant
in Mumbai called Francesco's Pizzeria delivered a pizza by
drone to the
delight of the entire city and maybe the world. Domino's has also tested its
own pizza delivery drone. It's called the "Domicopter."
CONCLUSION
Drone is part of the development of
technologies that rise to helps us in digital era today’s. We recognize
the development of technologies can help
us in some fields. In addition, technology has important
role in helping us to do our activities. Now Drone come for us with some advantages that can help us in some
activities which not easy to touch before and become easier to touched by
Drone, for example making films, air photography,
food delivery, seacrh and rescue and even mapping.
Drones are becoming increasingly popular amongst technology lovers throughout the world. Drone provide a way for users to see a large area of inventory without having to leave their desk. This is like sulotion for people that work in this field, Drone can help them to make their job easier. For example Drone can save lives, contribute to safe infrastructure maintenance and management, can give media access in hard places, can streamline agriculture management, and as tool for food delivery. Drone can help us in many ways. In other hand, drone is a multifunctional tool in this era.
Drones are becoming increasingly popular amongst technology lovers throughout the world. Drone provide a way for users to see a large area of inventory without having to leave their desk. This is like sulotion for people that work in this field, Drone can help them to make their job easier. For example Drone can save lives, contribute to safe infrastructure maintenance and management, can give media access in hard places, can streamline agriculture management, and as tool for food delivery. Drone can help us in many ways. In other hand, drone is a multifunctional tool in this era.
REFRENCES
King, Kristen. 2014. Drone
Help Locating Missing Child. Dronelife.com: Wordpress
Melle, Michael. 2013. 5 Benefits of Drones (UAS) That
Might Surprise You. SRI
International: Wordpress
Endi, Sevarianus. 2015. Drones applied for agricultural purposes. Jakarta: The Jakarta Post
25 komentar:
1. The parts of the work:
cover, abstract, introduction, discussion, conclusion, reference, appendix
Comment / Evidence :
cover, abstract, introduction, discussion, conclusion, reference, but without appendix
2. The title of the work
Comment/Evidence
The Title is clear, because she used a phrase not a sentence
"DRONE AS A MULTIFUNCTIONAL TOOL IN DIGITAL ERA"
3. The number of words on the title
Comment/Evidence :
In her title there are 8 words
Drone As A Multifunctional Tool In Digital Era
4, The title: A phrase or a sentence ?
Comment/Evidence :
for the title, she used a phrase
5. Abstract ?
Comment/Evidence :
Abstract is there, I think already complete. supporting by the title, name, student number, email.
6. The number of words in the abstract?
Comment/Evidence :
The contain of abstract around 164 words
7. The number of paragraphs in the abstract?
Comment/Evidence :
The contain of abstract only 1 paragraph
8. The content of the abstract?
Comment/Evidence :
The contain of abstract is about the function of drone itself
9. The keywords?
Comment/Evidence :
The keywords of the abstract is complete.
because there are three words, such as Drone, Technology, Multifunctional
10. The Theme?
Comment/Evidence :
The theme of this topic is about Technology Issue
11. The Topic?
Comment/Evidence :
The topic is Drone As A Multifunctional Tool in Digital Era
12. The idea organization?
Comment/Evidence :
The idea organization is about Classification based on function of Drone
13. The thesis statement :
Comment/Evidence :
The thesis statement is not complete, because there is no the spesification number how much the classification of drone based on function itself. she only mentioning what are the function, not the specific number.
for example :
Here we will classify drone as a multifunctional tool in this digital era based on its function, There are 5 functions according to .........
14. The number of paragraphs in the introduction?
comment/evidence :
in introduction, there are three pharagraphs
15. The three layer of information
( attention traper/hook, background information, thesis statement)
Comment/Evidence :
three of them are complete, but there is a litle mistake in thesis statement that I already mention in the comment number 13, there is no specific number of the function of drone itself.
16. The type of attention trapper/hook layer
Comment/Evidence :
for attention trapper, she used a question as an attention trapper.
"Do know flying robot. that can help us making films, air photography, food delivery, seacrh and rescue and even mapping ???"
but there is a mistake in the beginning of question, she said "do know", it should be change become "do you know".
17. The type of background of information layer
Comment/Evidence :
in the background of information, she use the definition of drone.
"Drone is an aircraft without a human pilot on board. Its flight is either controlled autonomously by computers in the vehicle, or under the remote control of navigator, or pilot (in the military UAVs called combat system officer) on the ground or in another vehicle. "
18. The location of thesis statement?
Comment/Evidence :
in the last pharagraph of Introduction.
19. The relevance numbers of supporting ideas announced in the thesis statement whith the execution in the discussion?
Comment/Evidence :
There is no the relevant number that stated in thesis statement but the contain are correlated with the discussion.
20. Quotation sources after the borrowed ideas
Comment/Evidence :
yaps, the sources are there as a prov to support the data .
like, according to dronelife.com, According to The Information Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO), According to The Jakarta Post (30/6/2015).
21. The types of information given in the conclusion?
Comment/Evidence :
The information that already given is with mentioning the definition and the function of drone as well, it is like summary for whole discussion.
22. The transition signals
a.Subordinate conjunction for adverb clause
b. subordinate conjunction for adjective clause
d. Subordinate conjuction for noun clause
e. conjuctive adverb for compound sentence
Comment/Evidence :
for Subordinate conjunction, mostly she used "nowdays". to make the sentence more interest, better she used like "by the time" or "right now".
for conjuctive adverb, I suggest, it can be used in the conclusion at the beginning of sentence in second paragraph "as a result, Drones are becoming increasingly popular amongst technology lovers throughout the world.
23. Grammatical Mistakes:
a. Verbs
b. Pronoun
c. Word order word choice
d. Sentence
Comment/Evidence :
there are some misspelling, like : eaiser, seacrh,
and then, in the discussion the point or subtitle that stated there using sentence, not phrase. like : The drone can save lives, The drone can contribute to safe infrastructure maintenance and management, The drone can streamline agriculture management, The drone can give media access in hard places, The drone can delivery food. So, in my opinion, the title or even the subtitle should be use the phrase not a sentence.
24. Punctuation and Mechanics:
a. Punctuation
b. Capitalization
for punctuation are clear. for capitalization should used in the subtitle at the begining of each word. for example; you write like this "The drone can save lives" then, it should be like this "The Drone Can Save Lives".
Thank you so much erma, I will fix my work and make it better. thanks for your suggestion. :3
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